Rain – wild, lashing, storming,

Like an animal confined to a cage.

 

Rain - as gentle as the breeze

That tenderly kisses your cheek.

 

Rain - busily working - pattering -

Clattering like keys on a computer.

 

Rain – refreshing, cool, moist

And fresh as a fruity iced cocktail.

 

Rain - as cold as the icy snowflakes

Which coat the mountain ridges.

 

Rain - as kind and life-giving

As the hand of Mother Nature.

 

 

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Weather Poems

This is one of almost 400 of my poems chosen by teachers in schools across West Yorkshire for publication in 2010.  I hope your children like it.

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There are many more simile poems here:   Our Language Poems

Wind - A Simile Poem Haiku of the Seasons Rain - A Simile Poem - Heading

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By Josie Whitehead

NOTICE:  Please - if you have enjoyed my poems and found them useful, would you kindly let the Children's Poetry Archive know, on this link, so that my name can be added to their list of authors so that others can find these poems which I've made freely available to you.  Thank you. Josie

 

This poem was the TOP POEM during the last year, but you might like to now try WIND which is also a simile poem.  

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